From our whole group reading aloud of No More Dead Dogs and then I used this as a mini-lesson on omniscient POV. This is what we noticed.
Noticing by Cathy Rode's Class
From our whole group memoir mini-lessons and from our independent reading immersion and close study of chosen texts for process studies, we've created this noticings chart of process studies.
A Writer's Notebook: By Ralph Fletcher
Noticings By: April Camp
* Uses stories to begin the chapters and shows how the writing can be done before you are asked to do the writing
* Uses catchy chapter names to help direct where you want to read
* gives examples of the type of writing that is being shared
* figurative language used
* shares ways to begin to notice the world around you in different ways
*Process Study: Punctuation
Flip's Fantastic Journal by Angelo DeCesare
Noticings Chart: process study
By Cammie Price
-author writes how a primary student would write, uses capital letters and underlines when wanting to add expression -written like a journal -"child-like" illustrations students can relate with -Flip went from not liking to write to loving to at the end (good for students to relate with) -days of the week are always underlined
-child-like tone is great for students to relate with/easy to understand (real life connections), good opening and beginning (writing like a journal got my students "hooked")
-tone, structure
-This reminds me of Ralph Fletcher's writers notebook for grown-ups : it encourages, inspires, and gives good writing ideas
-I use this at the beginning of the year to get students excited about their "yellow dot" writing notebook. We brainstorm ideas about what students may choose to write about. I love the idea of making a top 10 list of things you love and top 5 list of things you don't like. That is 15 easy off the cuff writing topics students can write about during free writing time.
"Process Study"- Drafting, Revising, and editing for publication Crystal Weathers
What you Know by Heart by Katie Wood Ray
After our class I started going through the many books I have accummulated over the years and have used at one time or the other and have put away. I came across several Katie Wood Ray books, Wondrous Words, and What you know by Heart.
This book has many sources for process studies but one that I have used and will use again is Drafting, Revising and editing for Publication. A few of the revision tools that KWR has gathered throughout the years and are what she focuses on in her text,
Live Writing
by Ralph Fletcher
Noticings by Kim Sutherland
6+1 Writing by Ruth Culham- Noticings Chart by Bonnie Cumbo
Launching the Writing Workshop by Lucy Caulkins and Leah Mermelstein Reccomended by Kelly Compton
Writing Essentials by Regie Routman
Recommended by Renee Phillips
Her book Reading Essentials has always been a go to book for me with Reading Workshop. This book is that way for writing. Just like Lucy Caulkins it is a nice complement to KWR.
Noticing Chart